ext_186049 ([identity profile] catscorner.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ficbitch82 2008-04-21 08:14 am (UTC)

This was just squeee-rific. Seriously. The start was all angsty and had my heart pounding as I read the staking from Dean’s POV and your pacing there was just perfect. And then, just like an episode from either show, it lightened up and had some giggle-worthy moments and the moments that just made me smile – like where Dean is jealous because Cordy is paying more attention to Sam than him. Just SO perfectly Dean. And the fact that Cordy really throws Dean off his game and leaves him so unsettled really rang true for me.

The whole fic was just incredibly believable and you did a beautiful job weaving the ‘verses together and even using the secondary characters without distracting from the focus of the story. I swear at the end when she went running back down the stairs my heart was all poundy again just like in the beginning – such a nice way to come full circle with that emotion!

And wow, that was some rambly feedback for you. I would quote my favorite lines but there were just so many! I do hope you write some more. There’s not nearly enough good Cordy/Dean stuff out there! Hope you don’t mind me friending you so I can get updates. I’ll also join the cordy_dean comm.

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