http://dulcedeusex.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] dulcedeusex.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] ficbitch82 2010-07-22 12:47 pm (UTC)

Wonderful story FB, are you the same FB co-writing "Champions and the Afterlife"?

Anyhoodle, back to this one which is totally going in my memories, you really captured the good ole days of ATS and of SPN.

"Thanks," she says after a beat, when the classic rock in his car has petered out into REO freakin' Speedwagon and is he seriously kidding with the 'gonna keep on lovin' you' crap? She thought he was at least marginally cool.

"For what?"

She's honestly not sure to be honest. Could be the fact that he saved her from losing yet another outfit on a gravelly surface, or the fact that he took out that demon. Could be anything. So Cordelia just shrugs.

When he meets Phantom Dennis, Dean is really freaked out. "You live with a ghost?"

- You're golden mate, totally golden!

She can hear her heart beating loudly in her chest and she turns, sprinting up the stairs of the Hyperion and out the door--To find Dean at the bottom of the outside set, foot at the ready to head back up them.

"Hey," she says.

She doesn't get the next sentence out.

Dean kisses her because he wants to.

Cordelia kisses him back because she wants it more.


- Love the way you make a cheesy romcom type moment feel right and special. If there's two people who need some of that it's these two.

It's not going to be tomorrow. They both know that. It could be weeks from now - years even. And if Cordelia's still around, she'll probably wait for him too. "Say goodbye to Sam for me?"

Dean just looks mock-horrified, "Like that? Sorry sweetheart, I don't swing that way..."


- Once again you capture all that is so upsetting and heartbreaking about these characters but also what makes them survivors. Nice memento mori too by the way.

xx Dulce

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